side view
front view
So for my text critique my group gave me a lot of helpful criticism. They said my background was my best choice because it radiates to the center bringing attention to the middle of the composition. They also told me I should straighten up the dots and wrap the columns with newspaper so it blends in. They also advised me to use thicker material for the dots, and for the smaller dots to add more height to it. For my accordion book they all agreed it was well put together.
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